Up until this point in the developmental process, the feedback received has mainly been from the group. What was needed was a new perspective on the video to provide feedback that can help improve the narrative or animation.
The most glaring issue is the use of subtitles. When the animation itself is unique and engaging, the text is hard to follow. There is quite a lot of information conveyed to the reader in a short amount of time that makes it hard both read and follow the video. In some scenes of the video, some people commented that they couldn't finish reading before it transitioned to another scene.
Having just text as well made the video monotonous to listen to. What was suggested was to add a voiceover on the video. With the voiceover, it allows the animation to be main focus for the viewer. Furthermore, because of the narrative, it does not necessarily need captions in the first place, the animation makes it relatively self explanatory.
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